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In " Smarter than a first-grader? Crows can perform as 7-10-year-olds on cause-and-effect water displacement tasks," Estrads explains Logan's research which examines the great crow's ability by using the water displacement tests at the University of Auckland in New Zealand. In the first step, Logan brought the crows from the wild and put them into the cages and hold them with the other birds. Second, brought the crows into the testing room which it has an apparatus that contained a two beakers of water, one wide and the other one is narrow. The crows understood that dropping a stone into the narrow tube is getting the water volume higher. The researchers are confusing about the way that crows used to think when they solved this test. Moreover, the researchers find out that colors represent something, for instance, red represents food. Crows are likely acting like children ages 7 to 10 and both of them have succeed the task while the children ages 4 to 6 were not able to success. The crow's research did not end and there will be another try.
 
In " Smarter than a first-grader? Crows can perform as 7-10-year-olds on cause-and-effect water displacement tasks," Estrads explains Logan's research that examines the great crow's ability by using the water displacement tests at the University of Auckland in New Zealand. In the first step, Logan brought the crows from the wild and put them into the cages and hold them with the other birds. Second, brought the crows into the testing room that it has an apparatus that contained a two beakers of water, one wide and the other one is narrow. The crows understood that dropping a stone into the narrow tube is getting the water volume higher. The researchers are confusing about the way that crows used to think when they solved this test. Moreover, the researchers find out that colors represent something such as the red represent food. Crows are likely acting like children ages 7 to 10 and both of them have succeeded the task while the children age 4 to 6 were not able to success. The crow's research did not end, and there will be another try.
 
Before correcting the paragraph, you have to specify what rules of grammar you are seeking to be corrected. Grammar is used in every single sentence in English, but each writer uses his own way of writing. As suggested previously, i would suggest that you get help from the writing center at your university. PLUS, all of us in this page are students :)
 
فيه مواقع اون لاين تصحح لك الكتابه حقتك مجانا و اغلب الجامعات فيها سنتر للطلاب ترسلين لهم الاساي بموقعهم او تسوين معاهم موعد و تقابلين شخص كويس بالكتابة و يعلمك. طبعا حيكونون امريكان و لغتهم الاولى الانجليزي فـ رح يفيدونك حتى بالجمل رح يتغير اُسلوب كتابتك كثير بمساعدتهم .. نصيحة
 
I've questions !

1- jack offered to take care of my garden and ____ my mail while I was out of town.

A.gets , B. Getting , C. Got , D. Get

2- ____ gold is a valuable mineral.

A. A , B. An , C. The , D. 0 (nothing)

I think its D ?

3. If I ______ following that other car too closely, I would have been able to stop in time instead of running.

A. Wasn't , B. Would have been , C. Was , D. Hadn't been

I'm confused between a and d :/

4. Jim was caught cheating on the final exam. ______ is unbelievable.

A. That he could do such a thing it

B. That he could do such a thing

C. He could do such a thing it

D. He could do such a thing

Is it C ?